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Love Birds





Billing and cooing,

vows seemingly renewing



On a park bench, hearts dance

enthralled in a beautiful romance.



Fly with me to heaven,

oh my, your curfew is past, it's a quarter after eleven.



Listening to the love songs you recite,

this is so comfy, I could sit with you all night.



A feather touch

with this kiss, let's go dutch.



"Can we go someplace quiet, away from this group"

He snatches her up with one fast swoop.



Perfume and lace,

a sly smile upon her pretty face ~




a collaboration by:
looneyeclipse & poet2angels

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 10, 2007

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    Loved it

    You guys write some of the best love poetry I've read
    I loved this as it just conveys such sweet, loving emotions, thoughts, and feelings. All the best to you in the contest!


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    February 10, 2007
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    A nice little collabe Lynda showing love and romance all my best wishes Brian.


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 10, 2007

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    Awww how beautiful, light and w/ a sense of love in the air. A wonderful read. Has much life and is simple 2 follow. Love ur expression. Gr8 job and good luck in contest! -theQueen"