The preacher man tells me my skateboard
was hocked amidst oscillating addiction
The Ariel needle leaves no smoke trail
as salsa dances are held atop roofs 10 years ago
The snow comforts a naked body stripped
of identification as genitals leave sans blood or scar
The rooftops leave after eight months
The sound remains as burial mounds scatter
A contest entry
- Anything Goes... As long as it's deep... by CrystalJet.
450 points, ended March 3, 2007, 93 entries
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I don't know what to say, I may just be stupid, but this poem is kinda confusing... -_-'
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Was it supposed to be an easy one? I'm pretty sure something layered was requested.
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