Every way I turn
seems to be locked.
The bridge already burned,
my way always blocked.
My solitary tread,
weary, fragile and long
Hanging by a thin thread,
never to hear Cupid's song.
A handsome stranger
walked into my path.
Protected me from danger
Showered in a loving bath.
Your beautiful soul
draws such profound art.
My number one goal,
straight to your heart.
One fateful day,
on the threshold I stand.
Leading to a mysterious doorway,
the key in the palm of my hand.
Author notes
The man I loved for four years has finally decided to give us a chance as a early Valentine's Day present.
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A contest entry
- Love Poems by Stingersinger53.
300 points, ended February 16, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I liked this poem, it is well written. Thanks for entering my contest. I will consider this for one of the trophies -
Way to go - a lovely poem, sentiments so well expressed in these lines - wonderful that things are working out so well for you. Have a great Valentine's day too.
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This is very well written, with emotion into it as well. I loved every line of it, and enjoyed reading this piece. I'm glad ya'll are giving it a chance, I hope things go well for you. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Simple yet elegant...
I enjoyed this light piece, (with a deep and intense message). Sometimes simple says it so much better. Confused me a little though Others won't understand, but you will.
Cheers,
Irish Angel
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awww
this poem is so sweet. i truly hope everything works out for you two. just from yoour poem i can tell you really love him!
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This is a great poem with excellent rhyme, except I'm not sure about art and heat rhyming. I find it really really hard to rhyme! Keep writing! Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx p.s. I hope it works out ok.
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It's supposed to be art and heart not heat. I fixed the typo.
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Such a beautiful love poem so full of love. Excellent flow and content
Good luck in the contest
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I know how happy this has made you. And I am so happy for you! I can feel the love throughout your write. Very emotional. Excellent love poem.
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