Calmness and serenity is what I seek
Feeling the ocean mist upon my face
Watching the white foam rise, fall
then disappear
Gentle breezes caressing the sails
The openness of the sea feeding
My quest for solitude
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I like this. This is very nice!
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beautiful
from the first warm day in spring, to the last one in fall, I live near the water, and seeks that very solitude...there's a cove where I write at, and there's lighthouses along the horizon...your poem is absolutely beautiful, for those are the things I look for when I go to the water...awesome write...smile and hugs...David
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When does this set saillll??? I wanna go....seeking solitude, bliss, very descriptive, I could feel warm sun on my face and the salty sea mist on my lips and face....Great job...
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Natural flow in serenity
Quite serene and blissful in its imagery. It left me with but one word as I read it. "AHHHHHHHHH!"
I like this write. I can relate to the quest very well in my own life's edeavors. It was very soothing to read.
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Very Calming
Beautiful poem, made me feel very relaxed .
just what i needed right now . Thank you very much
Great job. keep it up -
This is quite lovely and so beautifully written. I cherish my solitude every chance I get and linger in its quiet beauty and this poem of yours brought that image back. Enjoyed your words! Smiles, Terry
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