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I'm Penning Some Delight

I sit here and pen,
One man's name comes to mind,
As he's sitting in our den.

I think I'll surprise him
by taking him this
Erotic filled tin. 

Vanilla creme, strawberry too,
Kiwi, banana I'll
Name just a few.

For Valentines I've brought
My own fantasy Delight.
All slipping, sliding, Oh what a sight.

My Fantasy
I'll share
My man on me,

Across the kitchen counter,
Well make this just right,
As he enters me it's nice and tight.

Lotions, and Potions,
Loving erotic Motion
My valentine and I,

It's sure fantasy
Everything's right
In this one Delight.

Author notes

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Comments

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  • Walking shadow
    February 14, 2007

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    Damn that was erotic. You sure know how to do these very well indeed! Glad to have you around as a friend! Good going for getting HM in the contest!

  • panegyric ink
    February 10, 2007

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    awsome awsome awsome!!! I really enjoyed reading over all of this of your great and well written thoughts!!! The alliteration is spot on dead target and the rhyme & meter as well!!!


  • Blueskywonder
    February 10, 2007
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    Very hot and enticingly alluring... great imagery and lovely heartfelt emotion all added to making this a pleasure to read full of passion filled romance.Well done... thankyou for entering my competition and also good luck.


    • calvspw
      February 10, 2007
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      thank u

      thank you for inviting me to your page, and putting up a kewl contest. thanks again also for the revew. to friendships in pen

  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 9, 2007

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    Aww, u freak! Gr8 job here. Nice words--reads sensual and w/ class. Impressive read! Love reading ur work and look forward 2 reading even more! -theQueen"

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