We all knew you as the happiest kid around
You had your troubles as did anyone else
Though we never thought they would bring you to this day
The day that you would have a little to much of everyones shit
To take a gun and pull the trigger
To end your life with out a final good-bye
We loved you and we hope that at leats you knew that
When you left a peice of our heart you did take
And forever you'll hold it with you
There are many things that will now cross our minds
The main thing being
WHY
What was so bad you had to do this
Bring a pain to out hearts we never knew we could feel
So many are here
And you are now away
Though we know you'll be with us everyday
All the things we wished now we had done
Got that final huge
Said how much we cared for you
We know not why it came to this
But forever we'll remember you
And your wonderful bliss
Please tell me what you think
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life is hard
im sorry for the loss of your friend. it's to bad he chose to take the easy way out. -
Woah!
That is such a wonderfully written and powerful poem! It has a sad topic but i get the impression the mood of the poem is more of confusion of why they left you...Well done for the wonderful write and i am so sorry for your loss i know that probs seems so auttomatic response atm but its true.
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so sad
wow. I've experienced a couple of young deaths in my life, but never suicide, and that is so much more sad. it's really hard not knowing why. Remember that they probably didn't really know either. Not to be able to give you a concrete answer anyway.
The flow of this one is a little choppy in places, but it's ok, because the emotion you show makes up for it. Good job!
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