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~ Private Collection ~


I have sat here night after night
with your private collection of hard liquor,
Pouring you shots as you brag to your
out of town friends,
I have put up with your roaming eyes,
and your utter bullshit of Romeo syndrome,
Have smelled your stale breath
inhaled your cheap excuse of Cologne,
But you were sadly mistaken when you
thought you could read my mind,
When your slurred drunken voice
announced to the boy's,
You could make me yours anytime,
What I was really thinking was  how I should
shove this bottle up your self righteous ass,
and boot you out the door.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 27, 2007

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    A strong piece and very well done. You get better and better. You can feel the anger in this one and see it all clearly. Awesome job!

  • ea silver member
    February 10, 2007

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    I would end this on ass... the boot out the door makes it too cute. Very powerful! I love the pic that inspired it; I think you got into this girl's head!