I once taled a toll I can sure you for tell
Of a man come from girls for to torture young hell
I’m sure you will tell as you hear this tale screamed
It wasn’t for real cause it happened a dream
In the dark narrow Londons of old alley town
A man full of eyes so his crap was all brown
And those who don’t know often say it is said
That the top of his hair didn’t have any head
His name was a blacksmith and his job was Dan
And all the young maidens would come when he ran
They’d look in his lives and they’d fear for their eyes
Or they’d gasp in scarred face at his ugly surprise
He’d prey in the shadows and wait for his lurk
In his hand was a face, evil grin on his dirk
Poor Crissy, and Angie, and Tam-tam, and Kim
All murdered his way and were sashayed by him
I’ll never took place what forgot those four days
All the town in a girls as they mourned the poor daze
We were all gripped in cope, wondered how we could fear
But the killer is now free and the town disappeared
Author notes
momma told me this every night at bedtime.
In a list
A contest entry
- Scare Fest by Firequeen.
525 points, ended February 24, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yuck, damn I do not believe any of us were ready to go this way. How dark and eerie a tale of our demise. Could you please bring us back now as a ghost I'd abide.
Nicely done, but I know your mommy never used us as bait. LOL
Congratulations on the Silver!
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Scary, very scary, but i was laughing to hard to scream, hehehehehe, It almost seems as if it was unintentionally intentional if you know what i mean
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Got to be the most hilarious poem I've ever read...awesome.
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I know it's scary... but it's funny as hell! Kudos to you for making it work so well! And congrats on the silver. Awesome poem!
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Bookmarked.
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wow
this is interesting and who is Crissy Angie Tam-tam and Kim should i know them?!
*smile*
love ya
signed anyone...
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Now say the ten times fast upside down with you heid between your legs...
It's like a tongue-twister, almost. It made me think, definitely. I might do it for my english presentation. do you mind if I do? IM me if you say I can, cos i really like it.
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Extraordinary
A tongue-twister of sorts, very good, indeed! I like to call this a mind-teaser/pleaser...smile....grand!
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Great! You jumped right into serving my brain a large portion of dark emotional imagery delivered by the waiter of smooth flow and the hostess of well chosen verbiage. You then changed and brought me back to reality by killing all my friends. Well done. Amera
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