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Snow

The snow falls silent, stopping tears,
            blowing away all of my fears.
The white snow covers the blackest of doubts
          leaving a soothing calm.
but soon it to, will melt away,
          for nothing is ever here to stay.
Then I will be unshielded again,
          while all my fears crawl back to me,
I'm trapped again, no longer free.
          Now what is left for me to do,
friendless and alone?
          pain and fear where the bright snow once shone.
Now I shall hide in the shadows again,
                          until the snow falls to set me free.

Author notes

It snowed yesterday, so I thought this might be a good old random re-make of a short poem.

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  • allfayth
    February 17, 2007
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    good poem

    Let it snow let it snow let it snow. It snows in Germany in July so try moving there.


  • Bosky
    February 10, 2007
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    Hehe! Great job!!!

    Cassie