when life's sorrows seem
to surround and engulf you
my love shall be your sanctuary
from my tears shall you gain strength
your need to protect me
shall be your saviour from insanity
for i am woman
and they call me weak
A contest entry
- To be a WOMAN!! by KenjiStar81.
450 points, ended May 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am worth it! (Women only) by Erotic Dreams.
400 points, ended May 14, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is really really njce, beautiful picture too, thankyou so much for entering, i love the short lines at the end of the poem, really really effective, thanks again and much love - Zandy
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::applaudes:: amen amen amen PREACH IT SISTER!
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But weak we are not.. Good luck with the contest..
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the weaker sex
I love short poems because I think it takes a little more work to express so much and you certainly did that. Not only does it paint a picture for me it works on so many dimentions and continues to beg the question, who is the weaker sex "which can literally be anything", can't say so, has no back bone, cries a weddings, funerals and reunions. Now theres a peom if ever I saw it.
Love the work.
Terry
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Interesting.
I like the point.
Not very long though.
Short and simple is still good though.
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Short, powerful and moving. Meaningful things said in such short crafter pieces. Magnificent. Thanks for entering Prewrite Phenomenon. Good luck and the best of luck to you.~
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wow i just feel in love with that poem haha very nice work
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Women must be strong as they have the power to bring us men to our knees at the flash of an eye,a deadly glance that lures our very soul to the throne of submission where we are executed in loves gallows superb honey good luck in the contest
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Nicely Done
You have penned a well known yet little spoken of truth. Expressed with amazing simplicity and flow; this truly is a masterpiece. You are a true artist and I am honored to read your work,
Amera
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Right
Woman are anything but weak. They may not have the muscle mass of men, but in spirit they are often the most valiant and caring. Love, Tom B.
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There is a lot of power behind both the words and this picture together. You did a marvelous job of painting a strength hidden behind weakness. This is awesome. Good luck in the contest!!!!
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*my amazed face goes here*
Just when I think I have seen everything from you you manage to kick me in the head once again. I'm going to give you three manly bunnies to take care of you.
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Awesome. Incredible write. Best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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