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Spider's Trap

You lured me in
With your smile
Smooth as silk
Your voice
Laced with serum
Sweet, and thick
Every feature
Of your face
Refined to every pore
The air around
you thin, cool
yet heats my
churning blood

All nothing in
comparison, to
the coal pupils
in stone set irises

Void of feeling

Spilling over with

Knowledge

Wisdom fit

to your years

An evil like glint

reflecting back

 

You caught me

In your web of

lies, deciet, death

you took from me

my life, my will

my energy to live

and replaced it

with need, lust

A hungering passion

A thirst for what

you took from me

 

You left me there

Pale and dying

Lying on the floor

You left me there

To be reborn

As a wraith

A shadow of what

I used to be

An image of

What was me

 

Now, I, like you

Am a creature

Of the night

Walking dead

Without a purpose

You took what

I did not give

My soul, ripped

Sucked dry

Stripped, like the

Blood in my veins

 

You left me

there to die

To live a life

Without life

Spiritless

You stole

From me

All I had

 

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  • DarkRomantic113
    April 9, 2007
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    Nice imagery!


  • loveaswellashate
    February 9, 2007

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    I liked this alot... your wording was good... thanx for entering and good luck to you!
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