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Poetry in the throes (Double Acrostic)

Placing words here and there, from my memory they seep
Organizing a nice clean write, watch it slip  my halo
Erotica it ends up as, enticing as bodies writhe
Trying to visualize us playing atop the sheet
Riding you hard, begging you to go faster
Yesterday’s lover gone away, I need another today

Inciting you to play again I walk by in just a mini
Not wanting to go another round, I tell you that you’re mean

This has a desired effect; you now show me your meat
Heat is building up again, showing off your health
Energy is waning, I now start to writhe

Testosterone is all full blown, giving me your most
Huskily you whisper “I’ll grant your every wish”
Rallying like a wanton wench, I’ll take all while you’re near
Orgasm building I shout to the stars Yahoo
Ecstasy given, any more i'm not able
Sexual satisfaction at last now I am yours

Author notes

This is for the challenge group

Ok today in school, the kids that I thought had to do a double acrostic. This means that if the line starts with an A it has to end with an A.. Some call it mirror acrostic.. Some call it double acrostic. Whichever you prefer to call it, this is what you have to do for the next challenge.

Their Title was....

Poetry In The Thros.... It can be anything you like..

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Comments


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 9, 2007

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    This was very interesting and very good I love how out of nowhere it turns erotic wonderful job and it was great how you used the title that was given and so wonderfully done too
    Bravo


  • Disturbed Prodigy gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    wow, this is interesting i like it, you did a great job, you know this writer's block is getting to me, i think i will look over the challenges hopefully something will come to me, but as for you and this poem i love them keep it flowing

  • SensualWhispers
    February 9, 2007

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    hahahaha...

    you can turn anything into sex. hahahah i love it. You've done a great job and I love the way it flowed. You've done a magnificant poem and is wondering if I were the teacher and you were the student, how much trouble we'd be in for this kind of poem in school? ?hehehehehehe. Thanks for coming to the challenge... Kassie