the paper is torn
part of the heart left behind
never to forget
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With my deepest love, thank you for the short time we had together.
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Very good. I can see a love letter ripped up.
As well as someone's heart.
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yes, the sentiments in these few lines are very easy to decipher - a lovely poem you have penned here.
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Simply beautiful..simply stated...and simply painful..enjoy reading your talented expressions....Awesome haiku...always written, Love is, in the pages of our heart....
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You can feel it
Strong heart felt words, you can feel the hole that remains. Love is a strong emotion... the loss of love is as strong yet very painful. My heart goes out to you... princess...
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What a strong and lovely Haiku you have penned with such elegance. Love...the deepest emotion of all, for better or worse.
Excellent!
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Beautiful...Simply beautiful.
I love haiku, and this is by
far one of the best I've read
in a long while. Love, Lane
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But don't you wish you could forget? Much props as always the most talented Amera!
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This is a fabulous example of a haiku! There is nothing more to say. The poetry says it all. Three healing bunnies from a cave in a mountain in Tibet. (cost me a fortune)
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Awww!
how sweeet!
It's so short, but it suits the piece!
very sad. I'm so sorry for you. It's true that when you give your heart to someone, you never get all of it back. A wonderful write!
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