Your eyes shone with love
They peered from out behind
the cover in our bed
Kisses on the forehead
Your hands never leave me
They are always there
My heart has been stolen
By the greatest theif in the world,
You.
A contest entry
- I know you can write; pen some Delight. by Blueskywonder.
550 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow!
this is amazing morgan,u shown lots of love in this poem.he sounds admiring lol.if its levi obv he is lol.absoloutly brilliant darlin.its reeli sweet and beautiful hunni keep it up luv ya xxxx -
Very nice poem. Sweet and heartfelt. He seems like a pretty lucky theif. Great job.
Josh
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Brilliant
"My heart has been stolen
By the greatest theif in the world,
You. "
This is so cute love it lots. You have manage in so few words to show me the simplistic side of love. The everyday love. Well done
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I didn't steal it, you gave it to me,lol
This is a lovely piece of poetry and a beautiful way to tell some one you love them.Well done and thankyou for sharing.Also good luck in my contest... also thanks for entering.
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