O Teacher O teacher
Please teach me
C'mon and give me everything
I am your humble servant
I am willing to learn
I want your knowledge
Feel free to discern
I'll leave you this altar
Filled with delights
Moeny, food, and wine
Please just try
O sitting under the vine to the sky
Tell me the secrets so I can climb
Into the sky
Into the light
One more time
Take away my blindfold
Let your light shine in
Show me your reality
The one I should see
You can take me teacher
Take me away
Show me the wisdom
Quickly I must go
Teacher your eyes shine so bright
Your insides are filled with divine
Inside they hide
I'll search forever until I find
The realness you can show
You won't take it away from me
I know
So please teacher take me
As I imbibe you with love
Take me o teacher
To the realm of reality above
A contest entry
- By Invite Only by Heavens Child.
550 points, ended May 2, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this because we all crave for someone to help is us out like a mentor or something.There that one speacil person we look up too and are completly humble too. Nice write as always!
Bloved
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Imploring the Teacher for guidance and wisdom. Great write, I like the feeling of complete surrender and a willingness to make oneself totally humble in prayer. Thanks for the entry in my contest.
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In first paragraph there is a typo for the word money, it says moeny. Too late to fix, my bad.
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Amazing Write
I think this poem is amazing, I really like the flow.!!! Very good write, lots of wisdom.
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Hey
Thanks man, all you can do is try
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