When were under the night sky
The stars shining down on us
Make a wish and dream a dream
For all that you ask will be granted
You dont need a shooting star
Or a genie in a lamp to be given a wish
All you need is belief
If you believe in us then one day
The two of us will be one
A contest entry
- I know you can write; pen some Delight. by Blueskywonder.
550 points, ended February 11, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So soft
A soft , sweet simple write about love. One done nicely with all the fancy words or sexual implications. A pleasure to read
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wow small but has a big impact nice
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Cool. It was very eloquent. My only suggestion is to add a clincher. Perhaps:
"To exist in perfect unity"
I think it would be perfect then. Nicely done and congrats on trophy!
xoxo
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Wow... so few words and yet such powefuly expressed heartfelt content... true pleasure to read.Well done and thankyou for entering my contest... good luck.
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