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Anymore

You watch me from afar
My hair glistening in the sun
My sleek form weaving its way
Gracefully throughout the room
I throw the curtains back
So the sunlight may enter and
More fully illuminate my actions
You are too far away though
Still devoured by darkness

I love you with all my heart
And wish you never went away
Even though we are best of friends
I am not sure if you love me
The same way I love you
But even when not together
I miss you with all my life
I wish we never broke up
We would've been great
But life happens, shit happens
And no one can do anything....

About anything....

Anymore....

 

Just one last question from me to you--

 

Can we get back together?

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  • Baahltres
    February 21, 2007
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    At first it seemed like the speaker of this poem had accepted the break-up, but then the final line comes and you realize it's something different. Well done.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!!!


    ~.~Yvonne~.~
    Baahltres