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~Into My Life~

Into My Life

 

 

 

She came out of nowhere
and walked into my life,
bringing with her
purity and love~
unconditional.

 

 

 

In her group,
she diciplines with love,
strong, yet fragile,
and loving to all.

 

 

 

To those who know her
she is the light in their days;
to those just meeting her
she brings them joy
that lingers
long after she's gone.

 

 

 

This beautiful young woman,
a treasure to all,
has made her bed
inside my heart.

 

 

 

Get Well Soon, Kari!

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Comments

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  • Kari gold member
    February 14, 2007

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    Awwwwwww Thank you sooo much for everything...your love and support means the world to me I appreciate it beyond words


  • Truthful Princess
    February 13, 2007
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    awe

    thats so nice of you mommy!


  • Sherry gold member
    February 11, 2007

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    Lovely poem Patty filled with love, compassion, and comfort.

    Mom


  • My Darkness
    February 10, 2007

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    awww this is sweet.. i hope she is well, or atleast getting there! hospitals are not fun, believe me i know... good luck in the contest!


    • pattyann4500
      February 11, 2007
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      Thank you, Crystal. I'm sure she will just need a little time, and she'll be back to her lovely self. Love, Mom


  • panegyric ink
    February 10, 2007

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    Again, Patricia... you capture my heart with the beautiful soul that is truly yours. Evertime I come over, I have to prepare myself for the most awsome thoughts I know I am to read on this site!!! And again, you have not let me down in any way!!! Take care
    -brian


    • pattyann4500
      February 10, 2007
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      Thank you so much, Brian, for such a lovely comment. You are too kind. Hugs, Patricia


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 10, 2007
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    STUNNING

    Very very beautiful dedication. Wonderful words of love and hope and respect. :


  • catz Moderators member
    February 9, 2007

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    Kari has a wonderful way of weaving herself into our hearts, Patricia, and I see she's certainly made her place in yours. Such a nice loving poem

    Thank you for entering it

    Dee


  • Sweet Jane
    February 9, 2007
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    So Beautiful

    This is so gorgous.
    your background is beautiful


  • MargaretG
    February 9, 2007

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    This is lovely Patricia, such deep affection. I'm sure it will give Kari a blush of pleasure to see how she is seen.


    • pattyann4500
      February 9, 2007
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      She is a very special young lady. Thank you, Margaret. Love, Patricia


  • perdisbeaute
    February 9, 2007
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    Awe, that's so sweet!!!
    A cute and friendly read

    Michelle

  • OurxBeginning
    February 9, 2007

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    Awwww. This is very sweet and shows just how big your heart is. Such a nice dedication. Keep it up, mom, love ya.


  • paullallady silver member
    February 9, 2007

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    What a beautiful heartfelt writing for someone
    who sounds really sweet. The way you wrote
    this really is sweet and wonderful. She is very
    lucky to have a friend like you.
    great job on this one.

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