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My love...

As you walk up
with your long hair
You come to me
as it blows in the air

With just one look
at your beautyful face
Such magnifacent beauty
just makes my heart race

To me you are
my one true love
You are my sweet angel
from the hevens above

You are the girl
I love and adore
I want to be with you
now and forever more

She has such a sweet
and beautiful name
Our love is forbiden
this is a shame

Even when we meet
under the moon filled night
She is ... well no words
can describe this sight

Her beauty is
far to great
Our love is
desteny it is fate

I have you and
you are all i need
Without you i would
wait and bleed

May our love and hearts
will never brake into shader
I have you and that is
all that truly maters

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 27, 2007

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    Ah that's true love I guess. I hope that someone you mention appreciate this poem, you've certainly expressed your feelings very deeply. Having that someone special is indeed all that matters!


  • in the snow
    April 10, 2007
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    Godd poem. Wish someone loved me like that. There were a few speling errors. Good all the same!