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Snow

& it crunches as I step outside
& it seperates as I take my strides

The whiteness
Cold
Winter

Children playing
Snowballs flying

The fun
Cold
Winter

Snowmen coming to life
Eyes, nose, scarf, buttons
even a hat

It's life
It's cold
It's Winter!

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  • Rajaram
    April 29, 2007

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    Hey it is a very awesome write. Oh my god! wonderful description it is. Keep writing such poems dear. I would be happy, if you could spare your time to stamp your views on my poems.