In a magic garden
she wore a summer dress
I knew that's the moment when
I found my princess
As dreams gave way to early morn
and sunshine filtered through
There was something special born
I fell in love with you
A barefoot girl of innocence
who was lost in thought
Wishing she could find her prince
but knowing she could not
Forever I will wait for you
this is my legacy
Hoping that my dream comes true
and you'll belong to me
I will never forget that day
when more than flowers grew
This is when I gave away
my heart to only you
Author notes
One day i went to visit a lady i love but is taken and she was picking flowers and I was taken on this never ending dream.I want to publish my book and have her picture on the cover.
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Comments
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This is realyl truly sweet, I love it.
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aww this is amazingly sweet! great rhyme and flow! i can feel the eminating here! bravo! thankyou for entering and good luck!
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You missed at least 2 of the rules at first glance... I'm gonnna have to DQ you.
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Aww...that is so romantic!! I am a huge romantic. It was well written and a good read
Thanks for entering!
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Tender, tender, tenderly done!
I loved it, the imagery did speak lovely, and your author
notes were very sweet.
be careful I had a fella once stop and profess undying
love for me...at a gas station...next weekend?
I found him shopping at the grocery store with his wife!
ears/Seattle loved your poem!
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This was really really sweet. and the emotion in it was so beautiful.. the image you make with your words was just way to beautiful....
I loved it..
Peace to you, Jetleena
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this reminds me of a painting that ive seen,
great writing hun thank you for sharing with us
good luck!
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This is very sweet...it's simple, innocent love. I like it. Good job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
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aw such a warm place this poem takes you ...I thank you for entering your sincere poem much love, Raneika
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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This is a beautiful poem of love! Nicely done!
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I love the way this rhymes. It's a very good piece! Good luck in the contest, and thank you for entering!
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Oh my gosh..This is one of the most adorable things I have EVER seen! I love it!
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Wow! How romantic this is! So very sweet and magical! Best of luck!
Love~
Az
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I love your title...Magic Garden. I guess it would be magic after finding love in that garden. Very romantic, nice piece.
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This don't work for the contest, but I still like it. ^_^ The rhyme worked out really well.
Great poem,
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This was lovely, the rhyme worked well and the flow was really pretty
It was really beautiful and pure
It made me sigh a lot and it was beautiful
Enchanting little fantasy
There was a beautiful devotion and a beautiful essence of magic in this
I can't really find a constuctive criticism
Well done!
Thank you for entering
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very nice! the imagery is nice---
good luck
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Aww, how sweet! I really liked this poem, it was well rhyned and had a purity to it that was absolutely wonderful. Good job!
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Nicely done
This was a very good piece. Very nice flow with your words and it read wonderfully..Good luck in the contest -
"I will never forget that day
When more than flowers grew
This is when I gave away
My heart to only you"
Sighhh...Lovely, enchanting verse, Poet...I hope she hears your heartsong & responds in kind...Good luck in the contest, my fellow Libran...Indeed, it IS all about the balance, is it not??? Be well, Poet... Wanda
P.S.
It's reminiscent of a verse I learned as a teenager, author unknown:
"The Love in your heart
wasn't put there to stay ~
Love isn't Love
until you give it away."
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Made My Day
I am humbled by your response.If it didn't make my day then nothing could.Liked that verse you added.
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This is very beautiful and I love the title!
Lovely imagery throughout this piece.
Thank you for sharing this and best of luck
to you in my contest! I appreciate your entry.
Jeremy0826
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Hmmmmm....Goodness, Gracious!!!
Left me speechless...This poem has touched me in such way. I love the title "MAGIC GARDEN"
You truly have a way with words.
Very sweet and beautiful poem. keep up the good work!!!
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I can imagine you gracing the cover of my book someday.You in a summer dress amongst the flowers.Thank you very much for your kind words which have left me speechless.
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Such beautiful words coming from a beautiful heart..blessing the blank page with your words...so soft is its caress..Enjoyed this very much! Smiles, Terry
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When I get to meet such a lovely person as yourself I know why I love poetry.You have made my day'I hope yours is as good as mine.
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Awwwww,... this is so pretty! I love it Great Job!!
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