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AEIOU - layers of Love

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Allied,
Electrified, -
Inside
Outside
Unified

 

 

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  • Superb

    Ah, thou dost have a wee bit of wierd humor in this write. I almost blushed, but chuckled instead. Well done, my friend.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Angelicsoul gold member
    June 13

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    insightful

    You've captured with 5 words what so many fumbling lovers fail to, the deeper "truth" behind the physical gratification. Bravo.

    . Rewarded 4


  • MichaelBe
    May 27

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    First time I seen an acrostic on here, and i gotta say nice job! Very powerful choice of words you have chose, well done!

    . Rewarded 4


  • TizMoi
    March 28

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    I raelly like how you have compared the AEIOU to love. Love the acrostic format, a lovey short piece with amazing word choice This is a lovely little piece.

  • Turtledove silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    Uniquely written

    Haven't seen a list before in this contest. It is interesting to say the least. Well done. Spells out the vowels Nice touch.

  • ebaby
    August 18, 2007
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    this is great too...


  • Jax Nova
    February 9, 2007
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    That's cool

    That's cool the way you did this. nice job
  • Gypsy-at-Heart
    February 9, 2007

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    I love the acrostic style and really admire anyone who can make it work well, perhaps because I have some trouble with it! You've done it very well here. You've kept it very simple with the single word lines but your choice of words in themselves isn't simple so they work well in adding the descriptive element.

    Well done
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