You think you know me
You think you have a clue.
You have no idea who I am.
You don't even know what I do.
I am the Master of Evil.
I am the Maker of Bad.
I am the Creator or Torture.
I am the Lover of Sad.
I seek out pain and pillage.
I lust for hatred and abuse.
I thrive on anger and envy.
I want drugs with lots of abuse.
My battles are not easy.
They keep me very full.
I am active night and day.
It isn't easy to be so cruel.
But when you go to sleep
And it's very dark outside.
Remember that the Devil lurks
And you have no where to hide.
I live here with you!
Author notes
Pride
And "I read the rules"
I'm working on one that includes all 7- that's hard
Dragonfly
A contest entry
- 7 Deadly sins by shattered logic.
505 points, ended March 16, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow a dark one mmmm like the way you set up the atmosphere in the opening stanza and draw the attention which you hold through to the ending..As you words come moothly from the page they hit and create the picture fomring in my head as it plays out to the lingering thought evil is here ... so true evil is withint ll of us. thank you for the pleasure of the read brilliant
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thank you for your kind words... always nice to hear that someone enjoyed the read : )
dragonfly
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This poem flows with an ease. Lovely rhyme and rhythm. Very descriptive. A very nice poem. I really enjoyed reading this. good luck in the contest.
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thanks : )
dragonfly
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very deep very.....donnie like ((a friend of mine)) i liked it
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thanks, i appreciate it !!!!
dragonfly
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you know, this was eerie. i use to call someone the devilhimself and i spent a lot of time trying to hide from him and to keep him from my head. you wrote this well. good luck in this contest which we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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thank you... yeah, i read yours.... great write, mine is of little competition, but it was fun to write. i felt like i've known people like this before so i used them as examples.... maybe your guy was one : ) creepy
df
good luck to you
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nice write, this was well done, it had a nice flow to it and it kept me reading, you captured you sin very well, and i very much like how you ended it.
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thank you !!! ...... i enjoyed this write : ) fun piece to create. Thanks for the wonderful idea via this contest.
Dragonfly
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Great Job!!! I like the last line, it definitely personifies the subject of this write!
Good Job...
Azlyn
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