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Not Worth It

You're just not worth the effort
You're just not worth my love
You won't be mine forever
You've burned your chances up

You're just not worth the breath to waste
You're just not worth the time
You're barely worth the time it takes
To scribble out these lines

You're just not good enough for me
So tell me how it feels
To know that every word you speak
Has lost all it's appeal

You're not worth this wasted lettering
This page is getting ripped
You're not even worth my memory
You're name has even slipped

Author notes

I wrote this almost as a song, it's not very good yet, but I'm working on it.

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  • Never Fall in Love
    April 10, 2007

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    This is good
    Whatever got into your mind that its not good
    Its really good
    I can't believe you can move on like that
    And I can't believe that the poem was so calm
    You're giving up, and moving on
    letting go of everything
    I wish I was able to do that
    If only
    anyway
    great write
    keep it up

    Thank you for entering
    Good Luck in the contest

    NeveR ♥


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    April 1, 2007
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    Wow.

    This is fantastic. I could feel the emotion coursing through this. Well done!!

    <3BeautifulDisaster9

  • livestrong7
    February 12, 2007
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    i really like because i do