Flowers dance on twigs
When caressed by gentle wind-
Swing for butterflies.
Please tell me what you think
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in so simple a way you explain the entire work load that flowers acrry on them........small poems with weighty words..well done dear...guess you may like to view poetry on my page..I have a few fresh ones. -
Dear apee, you are quite good in writing Haikus, Masha Allah. And this little poem presented a very vivid word-picture and gave a very pleasant and fresh feeling to me. It was a nice, soft poem with a smooth flow. Keep it up !
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Ohhhh I like this. What an imagination. I like haiku because it is short and easy to read. I love the picture this one put in my head. I smile seeing the butterfly on its swing..
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i like!
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I am not one that really enjoys haikus but this was well worth the read!!!!!!! I truly enjoyed this one!!! A brillant piece of nature!!! Thanks for sharing.
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very nice. good work
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My dear khaahar joon,
It was really a sweet haiku poem. It was short but alive and filled by beauty. It wasn’t hard to see your flowers on the twig. It was more like cutting a piece of the nature and pasting here. I’m glad to see you have updated after all.
Always a pleasure to read your words
~Massy~
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