Time stops what seems to be for indefinite periodism,
no stop to the endless rush and closeness of the entwined spirits,
encompassing each other,
passing but not leaving,
closing in but not heading away.
As every plane of our beings enfold into one singular essence,
we thrive together,
and emanate as one,
luminous, ominous,
ethereal manifestation of love's passion.
With every passing kiss and veiled touch we fixate ourselves upon the mastery of each other,
the final result of a magnificent and predestined purity of love's destiny.
No longer can separation find us as we now become entombed in each other,
finding no avail to the wiles and grasps of contempt and fear,
but rather an everlasting trust that gratifies our very spirits and deteriorates the worries of lost integrity and faith.
Taking your hand I find solace in your grasp,
I find your heart,
pulsing with mine,
luring me toward you,
love's passion overcoming and accepted by all manner of my being.
I hold you close,
you are with me now,
no longer far but recognized as within reaching distance,
and I cannot help but wonder if this is but a dream for fools who dare to wish for the greatest thought of which God could conjure.
A contest entry
- Collaborations of Love For Valentines by Poetry and I Inc.
600 points, ended February 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - rite me a poem for the one u luv by checkXyesXjuliet.
385 points, ended February 15, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "make my heart swell" by second-born.
600 points, ended September 9, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh this is an amazing poem…full of passion and love…I loved the second stanza most…but the whole poem evokes heartwarming emotions…
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Creativity: 3/10
Concept: 3/10
Language: 3/10
Overall Effect: 2/10
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i really liked the 2nd stanza of this poem alot!!! its nicely written. great write
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Thanks a bunch!
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I Loved it. It is sooo beautiful!!! Great Write!
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Thankyou for taking the time to check out my poem, I'm glad you liked it and can't wait to check out a couple of yours
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Ok, now!!!
Wonderful job. I was made 2 feel ur emotions of love; a pure kind of love. Rare indeed in these times. Wonderful and educational. Also loved ur use of richness in the expression. Ur words delight me. Good luck in contest! -theQueen" -
WOW
This is beautiful
I tried to pick out a fave line or two but really there are too many lol. So full of depth and meaningful expression all the way through. A truly gorgeous poem
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This is a wonderful love filled, hope driven poem; the sentiment expressed aswell as the passion all went in-to making this a first class poem.Thankyou for sharing.
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Changes Needed!!!!! ASAP
I'd suggest u go back and enter ur name and collaborator's name in Author's Notes as I've said in contest, if u wish 2 be reviewed for ur entry. thx. -theQueen"
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