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match in the gas tank : BOOM BOOM

for a moment i thought  i saw a gas pump and gasoline pouring all over.
with my matches ready i'm still hoping and dreaming
how she would be walking the underworld
between wounded dogs, epitaphs and hung bizarre midgets
masturbating at the sight of her rotten flesh,
and all the dead will know that she is the pinup fool
that blew the boatman to cross the Styx.

for a moment i thought i saw a gas pump...

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  • calvspw
    February 9, 2007
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    interesting Boom Boom

    hmm was there a gas tank?? I seen flames engulfed in flame is what came to my mind. good luck


  • mendacity
    February 9, 2007
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    i think you did a great job of responding to the picture. the underworld part is interesting. i like how you related the two images, incorporating the sex into death with the boatman. i like this one.