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Heaven

Awake and surrounded by pure gold,
To die isn't just for old.
I think that Heaven is a place carefree,
a place that I would love to see.

Heaven is not that easy to reach,
Just like James and the giant peach.
I would love to go to Heaven,
With rejoicing and trumpets heard now and then.

Heaven you see is a place I would love to be,
With golds and riches all around me.
With happiness and joy beside me,
sorrow and sadness is nowhere to see.

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  • RainyClouds
    February 9, 2007

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    this is a really nice poem, you could just picture yourself there. I really enjoyed reading this. Good luck and thank you for entering the contest.