I look back to the land of cane
Please, can you feel my loss and pain?
I'm left to wander where I will
I wish that you could cure my ill
Dear princess will you kiss me now
Return me to my home somehow
For there my job is useful, good
I'll live the life a true Toad should
Don't blame me for what is to be
The cane is gone and I am free
So kiss me now and ease my pain
Then dignity I can regain
Please, why am I so misunderstood?
I live the life a Cane Toad should
So come my Princess grant my wish
I'll pucker up for one last kiss
A contest entry
- Kiss me and make me your prince by El Pescador.
1800 points, ended February 17, 2007, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
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This was judged a winner, by the team of poets. It polled the most first place votes. I am having problems with the site, but points and trophies will be awarded as soon as possible
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Catchy Write
Such a fantastic idea for this write! Imagery and content both romantic & humorous. Wonderful poem! Very entertaining and a pleasure to read. Good luck my friend, Don



