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Misunderstood

I look back to the land of cane
Please, can you feel my loss and pain?
I'm left to wander where I will
I wish that you could cure my ill

Dear princess will you kiss me now
Return me to my home somehow
For there my job is useful, good
I'll live the life a true Toad should

Don't blame me for what is to be
The cane is gone and I am free
So kiss me now and ease my pain
Then dignity I can regain

Please, why am I so misunderstood?
I live the life a Cane Toad should
So come my Princess grant my wish
I'll pucker up for one last kiss

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  • El Pescador
    February 17, 2007

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    This was judged a winner, by the team of poets. It polled the most first place votes. I am having problems with the site, but points and trophies will be awarded as soon as possible


  • Quiet places
    February 9, 2007

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    Catchy Write

    Such a fantastic idea for this write! Imagery and content both romantic & humorous. Wonderful poem! Very entertaining and a pleasure to read. Good luck my friend, Don