Your touch erotic,
Engulfs me in flame,
As I hear you call my name,
Touch me, light my soul
Fire soars, the touch
Of your hand.
Tongues licking,
Fires burning,
Hands embracing,
Vanilla enticing
Smells, sage,
Chocolate embrace me.
Stir me with your hands
Upon my breasts,
Engulf me, lips upon mine.
Lingering whispers
Turn my words
In in your mind.
Author notes
hope it meets your contest and engulfs you in flame.
A contest entry
- Pic Inspiration- grown ups only 18+ by slipperssun.
380 points, ended February 15, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW dang that was passionate. Very erotic. Well done. I just love how you filled this one up with such rising passion. Filled with fire and romance. Very good contest poem.
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thanks
glad u liked it engulfed in flame will read more of yours soon to friends in pen. -
he he
thanks lol
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Love how u use spices in ur work. Amazing and impressive read. U seem 2 have a thing for 'vanilla' in particular, I've noticed. I feel passion in this poem. Loved ur use of 'fire' and 'flames'. Hope 2 read more as usual.
thx for sharing cuz. -theQueen"
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0hhhh very nice
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thanks
what one see's the minds eye and a picture. lol
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Wow that was a greta poem it flowed wonderfully and had very good imagery that was a pretty hot write wonderfully penned
Bravo
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thank you
vanilla whispers her thanks, as she enters the mind, enticing alluring toying with you and your mind.
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