How lost must I be
Until you find me?
How far away
Have you become?
I can’t breathe
I can’t see
Now you’re leaving me
I can’t walk
I can’t talk
Now you’re ignoring me.
Smoke in my tears
I am on the edge
Two more steps
I’m off the ledge
You can’t leave
It can’t be
Don’t walk out on me.
Please come home
Please come home
Please come home.
Please tell me what you think
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Really good
Hey Steve, another good poem by you, hope your not really feeling this way right now, I been there and comne out the other side so you and anyone can too, I'm leaving also, allpoetry that is, had alot of problems on here that I wont go into, Im on my space now where I cant be fucked with, keep writing cos you got talent, thanks for the comments and STOP SMOKING lol -
Brilliant
Hey Steve, you wrote this with real emotion and you wrote it so for the reader it was impossible not to be there and feel the pain, great write, I hope your not down, if you really want to be depressed come and play poker online with me, man I been getting some bad luck lol, hope all is well tc
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No no. Everything is super de dooper
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thats good to hear :-D
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