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Bridge's Bliss

 

 

Here on haunted Hallow’s eve,

escorted down the bridge of bliss

led by her lover's torrid spell,

she foreswears her patrimony.

Her wild and abandoned spirit tamed,

tempered to synthesize the nerves

as she sleeps, she breaths his essence

in her subconscious, feeds his presence

cautiously, presumptuously!

Into her soul, he creeps

stealing her sacred sanity,

cleaving his own immortality,

leaving no room for ~escape

 

Void forming fortuitously~

Her fantasies rapidly take shape

‘tween the bridge’s turpitude.

She succumbs his pure profanity,

body bared and emotions splayed,

she sleeps, intoxicated by his elixir

eliciting hunger in earnestness,

expunging long held worth.

She is contaminated by love's infection!

 

Imbibe~

He’s making her weak

within her wilting womb, where

she wakes, living day by day

despairing delights wisdom.

Thoughts of him ~subdue

 

Blissful bridges

escorting her intimacy; pristine

Daydreams of pleasing in various ways,

give vent of hidden fantasies.

Everything about him,

everything within him

controls her every move.

 

The trusses weaken,

stressing him

undermining infinite love.

She soothes,

mellowing his serrated soul,

exhaling her essence

craving to be his cannabis,

coveting his inhalation of her

deep within his lungs.

 

Planks vibrating~

He’s singing sensual songs,

seeking her as the melody

so he can dance, eternally

to the rhythm in her soul,

with unabridgement, unfold

in her heart infinitely.

 

Mist enshrouded

bridge is swaying,

as she wakens

to his sweetened sin,

her senses pulsating.

She cannot let go,

he won’t let go,

so daydreams continue

their hearts near erupting.

 

She finds no peace within,

needs him digesting her

as if, she were his sustenance,

his most salient seraph,

sending both into abeyance

setting their spirits ~free


He,

the epiphany of she;

stirs,

sets,

pure love

liberating her

immaculate passion,

and escorting her

in mists of euphoria,

down the bridge of bliss

Author notes

I do hope this is what you desire.

However you want to do it...just blend in

and that's what I did! lol

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Comments

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  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    April 14, 2007

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    Oh, m'gosh. How shocking! LOL. Sure, and I was born yesterday...hehehehe.
    Seriously, this is unique in the horror spectrum.
    Using such grisley pictures to illustrate someone else's work. I'm sure it flattered it. Whoo.

    Descriptives are high-brow and language art
    delicious....all that goes on here...
    eating, rapture of its epiphany sensuous saturation, nearly self-sacrificial in itself. Exhaustive to its content.

    Were this mine, I'd have economized the length (in form) just a little bit, but then that's me. I'm always on the brink of being long-winded....lol

    Wonderful collaboration!

    . Rewarded 8


  • Cinnarry gold member
    March 11, 2007
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    wow!

  • Cinnarry gold member
    February 19, 2007
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    Absolutely Stunning!


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 10, 2007

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    wow that was awesome... i dont know what it was before but the way you put it it almost sings... well done with this one

  • Cannonsfire gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    Excellent job my friend, you have gripped the essence of these two lovers and molded them with your pen. Awesome.


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 9, 2007

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    INCREDIBLE....

    Our writing styles seem to blend PERFECTLY...

    If I didn't know part of it was me...I would have not guessed that wasn't all one poet!

    Great job and good luck in the contest!!!

    Sahabah

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