I cannot describe your smile
I cannot describe your eyes
I cannot deny my love for you
Yet, it should come as no surprise
I can see you in my heart
Within my mind's eye
My heart's as light as a feather
I feel like I can fly
I see you in my dreams
And you are my life
So graceful and perfect
Piercing eyes as sharp as a knife
I cannot say you look like that
For that is how I believe it
I'm meaning to say I love you
If you catch my drift
Author notes
This is for the first choice.
A contest entry
- Blind by inaliel.
300 points, ended February 24, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Can You Feel The Love Tonight? by tawk.
425 points, ended February 11, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing... i love the feeling i got through this wonderful creation....*sighs*
Thank you for your beautiful entry and good luck
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You and Bryan with your rhyming thingies... I really liked this though. Gave me the feeling of being in love with someone you haven't met yet. Like the one song by that one boy band... "I knew I love you before I met you..." I really love this, good luck in the contest!
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You and Bryan with your rhyming thingies... I really liked this though. Gave me the feeling of being in love with someone you haven't met yet. Like the one song by that one boy band... "I knew I love you before I met you..." I really love this, good luck in the contest!
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You and Bryan with your rhyming thingies... I really liked this though. Gave me the feeling of being in love with someone you haven't met yet. Like the one song by that one boy band... "I knew I love you before I met you..." I really love this, good luck in the contest!
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Such a wonderful love poem for that special someone. I so enjoyed reading it. Great flow and content. Good luck in the contest
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I love this. I have a thing for rhyming. I'm kind jealous now becuase you should definatly win.
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