Within darkness
you will always find light
within light
darkness tries to hide
without darkness
there would be no light
and without light
darkness would be gone
you see
darkness and light can't live
without each other
and they can't
die without each other
no matter what they will always be together
light is brighter and better
and it seems to stay forever
but doesn't darkness too
darkness has its own beauty
what do you see
when you are pulled into sleep?
what do you see
when you lie down in the grass?
do you see stars?
or nothing at all?
they say darkness is evil
that monsters, goblins and the devil in it
but is it that evil?
or do you just say that cause its dark?
all i see is its beauty
nothing more nothing less
but what do you see in the darkness?
A contest entry
- Give me your prewrites!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
450 points, ended February 19, 2007, 101 entries
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Comments
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i liked the thought.... and ... yeah^-^... i loved it!!! just liked all the rest of your poems!!! they're GREEEAAT (lol i just went all Toni the Tiger on you... lol) good job. Byez!
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I like this it is a great thought and I see the logic in it. Not to mention this is a well written poem. Very well done thanks for entering and best of luck!!!
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