your cheeks are mirrors
Where I feel fanciful to
Look myself often!
Your hair silky soft
falling on my face,floats
Arrows of desire!
In your lap I lay
Looking into your eyes,oh!
Are stars in your eyes!
Tomb your lovely hair
And sucumb to your beauty
Unmatching,my love!
Ecstacy fills me
When showers of your beams like
Flowers fall on me!
Please tell me what you think
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Dear Shankar,
Beautiful words of love. You have such a tender heart that's filled with love. The words just flow from your pen my friend, And don't worry I'm not really going to the moon.
Joan
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i too think you must be a special man
you write so much from your heart
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EXCELLENT
this is beautiful in few words because i am in awe from reading it thank you -
Beautiful
Hi my friend!! As always, you write with such beautiful finesse. I love how you have such deep love you carry in your heart, it makes you the special person you are. Never change ceegee, you are truly a wonderful person.
TD
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Sultry Moments in Time
make the clocks all hum instead to tick-tock. Your words give the ladies very beautiful pictures of love, and romance. I've enjoy this read totally.
Keep writing dear...................luv, Novy
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Creativity can certainly be induced by watching beauty - makes one think thoughts so they can write lovely poetry like this. Thanks for commenting on my poetry today. Glad you dropped in.
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how can you be so constantly sweetly in joy and love. Oh beauty does not move me anymore in the form of human. Only in nature do I find my solace. How have you not been jaded and crushed in this life that such tender romance flows from you..I wish to walk this walk and am going to begin today to try to hide my cynicism and disillusionment...pray for me.
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love and nature are two sides of life!
Sweet dottie, love of nature is unselfish and a cynic cannot enjoy. similarly if you love some one unselfishly, the beauty in the lover can be felt. Love the nature or person with a mind that appreciates beauty. nature has taught us somany things in life that make us lovers. love is life and life is love. Love denied life is dull. love is the music oflove , without love the life is mute. Tahnk you for your thought provoking comment.
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This is such a wonderful, romantic poem with such feelings of love and warmth. There is such a gentle way about this. Well done. This is beautiful.
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You are such the romantic! This is lovely and befitting the onset of Valentines Day. Very soothing to read and heartfelt. Love is such an awesome emotion, especially in its goodness. Beautiful!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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A well written poem for the holiday season of Valentine's Day. A joy to read.
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I really enjoyed reading this!!! awsome alliteration and your imagery is even better here. Overall this is very easy to have read through and I loved every well placed thought.
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ceegeeess~
Hey! I thought that this was a really good write. I like how all of your words went so well together. Keep on writing.
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BEAUTIFUL
This is a beautiful love poem,each line draws you a little closer to this flame, as though you are completely lost in your love ,words such as (WHEN SHOWERS OF YOUR BEAMS LIKE FLOWERS FALL ON ME ! eyes and stars,arrows of desire,) great poem!!
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Minty comment!
sweet Ann,beauty leads the thoughts to perfection.words from nature support the words of real beauty and the combination makes the beauty worth watching. Beauty in a woman is only tobe felt ,but cannot be expressed by poetic excellence. your comment is superb , sweet Ann
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very nice poem
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I find this to be a very loving and romantic write. May I suggest though to remove the exclamation points maybe? This might be my opinion only , but it seemed to distract from the flow...even though I know you used them to sort of make a statement. But that is well made with the words alone,
reenie
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