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Vanunu visits Langley

You will know the truth
and the truth will make you crazy.
If you tell the truth, it will kill you.
If you tell the truth, they will kill you;
And who are they?
Let's just pretend
this conversation never happened.
You weren't here; I wasn't here.
It never happened.

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You can google the name 'Vanunu'. You may find that it is radioactive.

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  • Sam-a-nantha
    February 24, 2007

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    Oh wow. This is very different, and creative. I like it a lot. I'm googling, and totally intrigued. It made me smile, for sure. It reminds me of this cartoon I used to watch. Hmm. Very interesting. Great job.

    • briareus gold member
      February 24, 2007
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      Thank you for your favorable comment. This is completely political, (almost) contemporary, and 'Orwellian' seeing Orwell as a true prophet and describer or our present and (likely) future reality. Also expresses the 'paranoid' outlook -- for several years on another poetry board I maintained a *political* thread entitled 'paranoia or reality' -- but that was then, this is now.

  • DepressedAngel
    February 12, 2007

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    Wow. this is awesomeness I really enjoyed reading this very much...thanks i did goggle.had too. i really loved this. well i love all your writes they kick sum massive butt.great job.. Heather

  • honey bear
    February 10, 2007
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    i lookad and wow...omg so long and so long alone too! unbelievable... great write

  • honey bear
    February 10, 2007
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    i enjoyed this as it makes the reader wish to know who why and what..anything that leaves the reader wanting more is an exelent write in my eyes!
    great work, thank you for sharing ..i wonder how many will go search the name..Vanunu now..? i knw i will

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  • Lactar Wolfgang
    February 9, 2007

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    Duck

    They and them may be watchin so be careful. I like the poem it seems like a polical statement. I thought is was well writen but that is my thoughts.

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  • oldpoets
    February 9, 2007
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    interesting.

    Not a great write,but okay.


  • WinnerGenius
    February 9, 2007

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    Excellent

    What a wonderful title...it's so unconventional. It makes me want to know who Vanunu is. Coming to the poem, it's smack dab in-the-face stuff. Frank and open. This is a very good piece of poetry, I should say. And incidentally or coincidentally, whatever you've put across in the poem is but the truth Makes for a good read. Keep up the good work. Good luck, God bless, be happy

  • AutumnSky
    February 8, 2007

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    You have no idea how much I love this one. And I don't think I can put why into words. It's better that way.

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