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Whispering Vanilla Winds

Vanilla winds whispering,
Tender breeze, shallow
Wolves seranade, whisper.

Love in the air,
Sings true through
Tree's in winter bare.

Winds whisper, loves
seranade, calmly calling,
Wolf clan brothers and sisters join.

Hear me oh friend of mine.
Queens rolling thunder,
Winds blow clouds,

Before the rain falls
Whispering vanilla
No tears shed, no one balls.

Hear me whisper,
Nightly falls,
The howl of the wolf,

You'll know I'm near.
Visions told,
Love to hold.

Love spoken in pen
read them
aloud hear them in your den. 

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Tender Wolf, winds calm, whisper through the breeze follow my vanilla charms

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  • libithina
    April 22, 2008
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    I can smell that vanilla charm
    wafting a wisp in the air Mmmm lovely imagery
    Hugs Lib x x x


    • calvspw
      April 30, 2008
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      Vanilla Wines

      Vanilla whispers sent your way. thanks


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 9, 2007

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    gr8 poem. Speaks of higher realm of love. Has good flow and scheme pattern as well. Good luck in contest and thx for entering. -theQueen"


    • calvspw
      February 9, 2007
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      Thanks

      Your name hidden in the poem is that ok?? thanks for the review and letting me join. ME


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    February 9, 2007
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    i really did like this one


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    February 8, 2007

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    this is beautiful my friend.I love the feel of nature combined with love...Hear me whisper,nightly falls,The howl of the wolf...you are sweet vanilla cream and a dear friend.may gentle breezes guide your way


    • calvspw
      February 8, 2007
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      thank u sister wolf

      thank you, to your friendship and wolf, kinship. hear me, my wolf heritage whispers also in the breeze, as my vanilla charms are smelled in the whispering winds.

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