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Dont know what to do.

Im tired of trying cause inside my soul is cryin.
Just when I think I have it all figured out it feels like im dyin.
I dont know what to think and I dont know what to do.
Im feeling so alone in this world without you.
Sometimes late at night I still reaching to your side of the bed.
My mind still filled with all of this heartache and it fills my head.
I am lost here somewhere deep inside.
Really I need a friend to whom I can Confide.

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Dont make comments about the english this is written so everyone can understand from a simple person point of view.

If it sounds un finished to bad and i know its not my best write.

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  • airhynne
    November 13, 2008

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    it connects

    I think this a a very connective poem. Many people feel this way, but have trouble putting it into words.


  • saseychik0688
    February 10, 2007
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    great write


  • Lucian Valcor
    February 8, 2007

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    i think we all feel this way some times dude and yes we all need some one we can confide in and know we can trust and keep the trust in return.. i know the feeling well my man