Bent down in humility
Arms raised in supplication
I feel His presence upon me
Calming, answering my soul
Author notes
i read your dreaded rules
In a list
A contest entry
- My Flow by zochit2me.
650 points, ended February 13, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked
Debilynn, "bent down" and with "arms raised" you caught the spiritual position perfectly here. Truly a golden write.
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Interesting spiritual piece. Congrats on the gold
Pozo
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Wow.
Wow inspiring. I love the picture and every word you used to describe the feeling and the imagry. Amazing job!!
A MUrderous Lament -
such a short poem with such a powerful meaning! wow... what a few words can do is amazing. great write! May God bless you!
♥ ,
jewel
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This is a good write you penned here debi, in just a few shorts words you described the picture perfectly. Good luck in the contest, well done dear poet
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excellent
Very subtle poem on a subtle subject. Apt word selection and adequate subtalty. The grace and precision is commendable.
Dr.Hemant Vinze -
WOW!
This is very powerful!
Every line is placed with precision and grace.
Best of luck
Becky
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Wow! So exquisitely beautiful and serene and filled with our Father's presence. Great job. I love the line "I feel his presence on me, Calming, answering my soul." The Lord does answer our souls. He is cool water to my parched mouth, food to a hungry heart and more love than I can image. Grat Job.
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This is very uplifting and comforting. Seems your words always find me to touch me when I need them most. Nice to feel that I am not here alone and that he is comforting me even when I am angry at the turmoil he has thrown to me. Well written and powerful in just a few lines. Your pen speaks volumes. Dawn
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Good
A spiritual essence coursing in your write immediately. You are quite spiritually in touch in general but seem to write about it with a personal touch, very good work and always a pleasure to read
~Tia
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This is so beautiful and makes my heart sing! Hugs, Patricia
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The other way caught me, but his one the last line was so calming and made it stand out even more!
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Excellent
Brevity is the soul of wit
Much said in very few words
Love it
Rick
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This is such an uplifting and hopeful poem you penned here Debi, well done dear poet good luck in the contest
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This works well...
...with the photo. I'm intrigued at how the first two lines are put together with the last two. It is true how we get fellowship with the Lord by having the right heart towards Him.
So much is said in so little.
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Words of Vision...
I can see clearly the correlation between the poetry and the image. You caught the spirit of this in so few words. Very beautifully written and envisioned.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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lOVELY METAPHOR, LIKE FLUID, FLOWING DOWN ....THE PRESENCE OF GOD, IS FELT IN THIS POEM....SUCH CALM...WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL WRITE!
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Oh my, this is wonderful. You caught the meaning in that statue perfectly with accurate poetic phrase.
I love the descriptive wording to portray the
emotion that this piece shows.
great job with this one.
good luck in the contest.
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