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Crimson Addiction and Fallen Angels

I dreamt about you the other day,
the simply silently screaming fallen angel.
She had cast off her wings and dropped from the sky...
little lace dress and ribbons too.
She landed in a heap, and out came you;
glimmering, sparkling, and addicting.

Dreams of drugs and hope of love,
but empty you seem or broken;
I don't know which
but you are a witch aren't you?

Can you show me;
Show me how to hypnotize and amplify
the things people want of me.

You twist them, and turn them;
use them and hurt them.
Yet come back, they do,
and commence the hours of bloodlust.

Pain, orgasmic and sharp as a blade,
the days and nights of longing,
longing to be bitten with teeth sharper than
the stilletto heel that has been made into a fine point,
so fine that it could sew a dress.

The agony, the passion, and the lust...
It floods the senses like so many fairies.

And here we are, home again.
I dreamt of you the other day,
and realised no matter what,
You are my crimson addiction.

Author notes

YAY! This poem was written for me by my girlfriend, Misty. I Love you soooo much Misty. This is her Valentine for me, and I posted this with her permission. Love you Misty <3

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  • Dirty and Broken
    March 15, 2007
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    very good poem
    you should feel very loved...


  • slipperssun gold member
    February 9, 2007

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    wow that was an awesome write... your friend deserves thepraise and the honour of writing this... glad you were enamoured enough by it to place it on your boards... well done to your friend


    • Crimson Lotus
      February 9, 2007
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      Thank you, this was a valentine gift from my girlfriend, Misty, known on AP as Taoreta Tenshi. She's new on AP, so please give her a warm welcome ^_^

  • cryincherub
    February 8, 2007
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    OMG

    I love this poem I have no words


    • Crimson Lotus
      February 8, 2007
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      Thank you, I love it too. My girlfriend is the world to me <3 She's soooo wonderful.


  • Taoreta Tenshi
    February 8, 2007
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    I love you to mia

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