An Erotic, Romantic Cruise (Part FOUR)
It was early at noon when Dew got up first. Draco's back was to her, so she put an arm around him and kissed his neck. Then, she got up and put on a sexy blood-red bra and underwear. The bra straps were tied from the back and around her neck, it also made part of her breasts visible. The underwear had a big french cut and its straps were tied from on both sides. She went to the kitchen and made some breakfast. She put the food in plates and made them float to her room.
With the plates floating in mid-air, Dew stroked Draco's head. He opened an eye, then the other and smiled when he saw her. He kissed her cheek and noticed the floating food.
"I'm starving," he said.
"Good."
When they were done eating, Draco went to the bathroom. While Dew was in the kitchen, a very naughty thought came to her. So, she quickly washed the dishes and as soon as Draco was out, she led him to the deck, and gave him a glass of Mango juice. Then, she went down below and claimed she needed the bathroom.
She conjured up her cassette and CD player. Then, she took out a skirt, that was slighly transparent and put it on. It was not an ordinary skirt; it had straps at the top at the ends. So, she tied it around her body, and it revealed a thigh. She put in a tape and there was Draco's CD in as well. She rewinded it to the song she wanted and stopped. Then, she called out to Draco to come down and help her with something. She became invisible before he came in.
Draco came down and looked around, but could not find Dew. He rubbed his head, then the music started. It was a sort of drumming he had never heard before, but which provoked his whole body to dance. Then, Dew appeared right in front of him; she was dancing to those drum beats.
The way she danced made Draco gape. He did not know what sort of dancing this was, but she sure did. It was belly dancing! She shook her waist and turned round to show him her ass as it danced to the song. There were no vocals, it was music only. But who needed anyone to sing to this?!
The music got higher and quicker, and so did Dew. As she danced and shook certain areas of her body, others began to move as well. Her breasts swayed and Draco could hardly take his eyes of them. The music slowed down and so did Dew. She turned round again, with her back to Draco and followed the rhythm of the song. Slowly, she moved her ass, she raised her hands in the air, the bent her back backwards and moved her hands in the air.
Draco was speechless. He sat down on the bed. Soon, Dew was sweaty. She moved towards her man, and seduced him with her moves. When the music slowed again, she let him put his hands under skirt and he un-tied the straps of her underwear. Which immediately fell to the floor. Things were getting hotter by the second. When Dew approached him again, this time really shaking her body, Draco stood up and she rubbed her skirt against his manhood. She turned to him and pushed him on the bed.
Draco was getting really hot now, and so his hand went straight to his manhood. Draco stroked himself a little, but never taking his eyes off Dew. He could see drops of sweat falling from her neck down her covered breasts. So, he got up and unstrapped the lower straps of her bra, which made it very loose, and which revealed almost her entire breasts. Then with a final very soft pull, he unstrapped the straps around her neck and the bra fell to the floor, revealing her lovely, sweaty breasts and her hard nipples.
The music's rhythm and beat was very quick now and Dew danced to it. Her breasts no longer swayed but danced too. Then, she did something like a shiver, in which her whole body vibrated for a minute. Every single inch of her body shook and shivered. Draco clapped his hands to her and whistled as if he were flirting with her.
Even though the song was ending, and with a final drum and a bit of music, she did that shiver again and stopped. Draco watched for a few seconds in her pause. Then, he went to the CD Player and turned on his favourite song: "Your Body is a Wonderland" by John Mayer!
The music started, and Dew fell on her back on the bed panting. It was very different from what she danced to, and Draco knew she was exhuasted from the hours dancing. He sang with Mayer:
"We got the afternoon
You got this room for two
One thing I've left to do
Discover me
Discovering you"
Draco turned the volume down and sang "Your body is a wonderland, Your body is a wonderland, I'll use my hands!"
He moved to her and ran his hands down her shoulders, breasts and stomach, then up again. She was sweatier than he expected, which made him even hotter. He took off her skirt and bent over her and kissed her lips, while his manhood teased her belly.
Dew moaned and Draco opened her legs. Then he flipped, and put his head in between her legs, while she took his manhood into her mouth. She pulled his manhood and she could hear him screaming in her pussy. It was not long, before they both orgasmed and drank each others juice. Then, Draco flipped again and was over her. He kissed and licked her lips, while his manhood entered her.
He felt she was really tired, so he orgasmed one last time and took her in his arms. She fell asleep almost instantly, and shortly so did he.
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It was sunset when they both stirred. Draco stroked Dews hair and she woke up. He got up and took out two robes. They both got into them and they both watched the sun set, in each others arms. Draco then asked Dew to wait for him while he got something. He disappeared below, then came back after a couple of minutes. He had two bottled of Fire Whisky and some chocolate muffins. They ate the muffins then, he took out the Fire Whiskey.
"Being a Prefect, I would not allow you to drink this, but you’re my girl and love and it is summer, so you can try it. It is pretty powerful though!" He said.
Draco could tell, Dew was excited. so he uncorked one of the bottles and gave it to her. She gulped some, then gave him the bottle.
"It is sort of hot and stings and feels weird!" She said.
"I know, I felt the same way the first time I tried it."
Suddenly Dew burst out laughing. Apparently the drink was a bit too strong for her. Draco gulped some down as well, then, he crawled towards her. He lay her on her back and rode her. He gulped some Fire Whisky again, and now he too could feel the drink taking over him.
He took a breast into his mouth and sucked and licked it, then he played her nipple with his tongue. Then, he moved to the other breast, while Dew screamed and laughed at the same time. Draco began pulling his manhood out of her then thurst it in harder. He repeated this, as she moaned. Then, she rode him. He put his hands under her ass, while she moved her body on him and made her breasts move with her. They glistened with Draco's saliva. Then, she pinched her nipples.
"No, those are mine! My nipples! I and only I can pinch them" Draco said, and he laughed at what he was saying.
So, Dew bent over him and teased him with her hard nipples. Then she lay over him and still riding him, and they caressed each other, and orgasmed.
Draco apparated them to her room, and there they giggled and teased one another. They also moaned, screamed and orgasmed, till they fell asleep...
Author notes
The shiver thing, is known as the Ra'sha (or the Ra3sha)
I promise this time Part 5 won't take long
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New ideas ,same flow of emotion and strong passion
I especially liked the idea of the belly dancing thing..hot indeed
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oooooo i really like this. there are a few spelling mistakes but like i said it dosnt bug me. one thing to change though : Draco apparated them to her room, and there they giggled and teased one another. i think its supoes to be dew donig the apperating. other then that i loved it.
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this is very HOT...althought not in poetic form i loved it. i am certainly reading the first 3 parts and coming back for the fifth. thank you for entering and best of luck to you...
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Very hot!!!
As usual, I tried to proofread but noticed only one mistake, in the first paragraph: "The underwear had a big french cut and was its straps...." Here the word "was" should be deleted.
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OMG!!! this is great and amazing this is going 2 make the best book when you're done writing it. But when i was in the middle of reading this and I had a major visual of the 3rd oldest Weasley (aka Perce, although I don't know how 2 spell his name and I can't find it in any of my books) and some other chick major grossness. but once I banished that though I really enjoyed it. Everytime U writie, it gets better .
Keep Writing
~~Meri~~
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nnnnOoooOooo i WANT MORE! LOL, This is great, as good if not better than part three, keep up the good work, i really enjoyed this, im me when you write more, i would be happy to read
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loool nooni ok this was as usual pretty hot and girl i can see that well u need ur Draco lol this mind of urs is so damn wild i love it lol cant wait to read part 5 sorry 4 being late to comment but i dnt know what's wrong with AP
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it's incredible how much detail you can put into sexual encounters if you know what I mean. awesome job Nooni. I don't think I will ever be able to watch or read harry potter again without thinking of this story! haha, really though, can't wait until your next chapter!
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I really enjoyed reading thru all of this!!! Amazes me how well you ahcve really thought all of this out and in such detail, completely an awsome achievement with this!!!
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Well done! I very much enjoyed this part to the story! Thank you for sharing and all the very best to you! You write well!
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What a hell girl is this Dew. They didn’t get tired, Nooni? They don’t feel shy when you see them with details? Ah ok I stop now but give it a surprise! Something that make us go
they are just having sex in your poems. It is not that pleased. I still expect Dew’s crying since she deserves some, in my opinion and a question: how about their parents? They still think they are in farm? 
parents should take care more their children 
By the way, you gave us the hot feeling to us. Thank you for sharing with us
~Massy~
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No.
I would suggest you look over your sentences, because there are some that are um... sketchy. And while you do have talent, don't insult it with elementary school lines like " and it did too!" And if you're going to say "ass", don't say "certain areas" anywhere near it. Good erotica is descriptive, yours was as vague as the money behind Anna Nicole's death. But please, before you attack, think. I am not like certain poets also found on this site who attack others' work, simply because it is a game to them. I speak because it will improve your work: it only stings like an insult if you insist upon taking it that way.
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Damn......that was good. So tell me why you didn't sign up for my erotic challenge? Great write
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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Guess I missed it!
If there are more I'll be sure to join in.
Thank you for the comment and the applauds. I am glad you liked it!
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Oh i saw ^_^
I just didn't have time to comment earlier. ^_^
Nice piece once again.
I think a fluff chapter would be great to see next (fluff=cute romance).
But its your story ^_^
Looking forward to the next chappter...
Should the older Malfoys make an appearance (add some conflict)? I think it'd be fun to add more plot in here.
But yes aweseome piece as always ^^
I take it you found time to avoid your parent/sibling observation ^_^
ttyl
~ Warious
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The other Malfoys come after the series I have plans in mind for that too! *but don't tell Massy hehehe*
Thank you for the applauds!
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Wow.. I loved it. In fact i've loved all of them since you first started writing the series. I loved the whole belly dancing part and when they got drunk too it sort of reminds me of my boyfriend and I one time. Well I truly loved this one. Keep it up i look forward to reading the 5th. Emily
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Wow...
A most interesting piece. VERY interesting... Never read an erotica with such a story behind it really!!! I am not quite sure what to say other than GREAT job!!! You turned me on a bit as well!!!
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Well, what a naughty piece! Very well done. You could probably try dividing the text into paragraphs. I just wonder how much time it took for you to write such a hot story. Very interesting, I particularly like the way Dew simply conjures up things and makes things float. Riveting from start to end. Keep up the good work Good luck and God bless. Be happy 
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Thank you so much Bjay! I am really glad you enjoyed reading my "naughty story"
It is divided into paragraphs
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