we spoke many languages
sang similar songs
drummed similar drums
danced divine dances
now we have simply added color
Author notes
See http://allpoetry.com/poem/2610824 for the original
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A contest entry
- What Is Your View? 5 Lines/ 15 Entries, Quick Contest! by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended February 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh man! This is terrific! Just plain terrific!
Brief and to the point it takes us to the edge of awareness then give us wings to fly!
Marvelous!
Marianne -
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thank you for your kind comment...I got carried away with the first one and met a challenge...I guess it worked...
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Very beautiful! Wonderful view on the diversity of human culture...yet how much the same we really are.
Best to you and thank you for entering!
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I take it back. You can say just as much in five lines.
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