My heart drips like the rain
as I fall in love with you again and again
Each smile we share is a gift
Every perfect kiss is remembered by these pink lips
The sun shines down on me today
as I bathe myself in your very presence
As you kiss my cheek and whisper sweet nothings in my ear
laughter poisons my very soul
Happiness is home when in our hearts
I love you more then my simple words can express
Author notes
This is just showing the pure feeling of love itself...I hope you like it (:
A contest entry
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Comments
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It makes me smile.
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In the sixth line... is the last word supposed to be "presence" or is it meant to be "presents?" Sorry, I'm a bit of a grammar freak, had to bring it up.
This is a beautiful write. I lived the flow and the message. The only part I was disappointed with was the last line, though I'm not sure why. You titled this poem well though and it otherwise works perfectly. Great job. Keep up the good work!
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Yes it is ment to be presence, thank you for pointing that out. I'm glad you liked my poem. I also like the title (lol thats why i picked it) i think it fits well. Thank you for you comment and good luck judging!
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I love your sweet poem... very beautiful thanks for entering and have a good day
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Good job with this one i really liked it. You are a very talented writer and i hope that you will just keep getting better. Good job and keep up the good work.
Lindsay -
Oh so touching
This was so passionate and truly loving. Really goes along with your name, beautiful.
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Awww, this is a very cute write about love, and you expressed your feelings well. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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sweet
a lovely expression of love....
TY for entering my contest...
Lynda♥ -
This is really sweet and pretty! (though you might want to check your spelling) but I mean that with love! Very good job. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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thanks
Thanks for the comment..And the tip on the miss spell lol..i fixed it..Great contest by the way!
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