My AP daughter she became,
-Kamala Kari- is her name.
A poet's heart she possesses,
works I've read are all successes.
I'm sending rays of sun to you,
hope they make you better than new.
Along with them, thoughts and prayers,
you've grown too old for teddy bears.
Come back soon with your smile so bright,
we'll watch the darkness turn to light.
No hospital can hold you down,
soon you'll be dancing round the town.
Make sure to get the rest you need
and all the doctor's orders heed.
When you get back we'll have a chat,
I'll be here for you count on that.
Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)
© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
February 8, 2007
Author notes
A little rhyming verse to send my AP daughter get well quick wishes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Hear It For - Kamala Kari - by catz.
1400 points, ended February 14, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am learning slowly to balance things and not overdo stuff. It's very very hard
Thank you for everything and for your wonderful support. I really appreciate you
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Kari, We all try to balance things in this hectic world we are a part of. Some days it is possible and others it isn't. The one thing to remember is, whatever has to be taken care of will still be there and you prioritize what gets done first. The first thing you need to do is heal from the surgery. I appreciate you also, very much so. Get well quickly. Love always, Mom xoxoxoxoxo
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nice poem Joyce
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Michael, Thank you for the applauses and the lovely words. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece. Love and God bless, Joyce
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you know when you know there is something to come home to you tend to get better a lot faster, i think this will help her alot, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Aaron, I am sorry for missing this comment. I don't know how that happened. Thank you so much for the lovely words you always give to me. Being home does help a person get better faster. Thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Kari will love this, Joyce In my contest I said I was goimg to let Kari pick the winners, but I can see right now that she's gonnna realize that all of you are winners. This is a very loving and light hearted poem you've written for her.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for entering
Dee
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Dee, Thank you for the applause and your lovely words. I didn't realize she was going in for surgery. We haven't been in touch for a while. I hope that she will contact me when she is home. When I saw your link to this I went straight to it. I'm very happy that you enjoyed and I hope it does help to lift her spirits when she is back. Thank you for hosting this, I appreciate it very much. Love and God bless, Joyce
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it was very nice of you to write this poem for your friend. your rhyming and flow were very good. thank you for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie
good luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna -
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Viyanna, Thank you very much for your lovely words of praise for me. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece and thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce
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