Shadow boxing
with volatile
adversities
Multifaceted octopus
of myself
Grasping the
edge of
reality
I mock then tease
punch and jab
Knock my own ass out!
A contest entry
- 10 lines - 10 minutes - 10 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended February 8, 2007, 7 entries
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Wow, what a powerful write in the short time limit! You've done a great job, lots of luck in the contest!
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Ahhh I definately feel this one, I do love these quick writes from you, such powerful messages within them
Karen -
I do that quite often, knock my own ass out that is.
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Very nice poem.
Multifaceted octopus
Of myself
Grasping the
Edge of
reality
Excellent lines! Well written, very well written. Best of luck.
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You have an interesting sense of humor.
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