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The Power is in The Word

The Magic is in The Will
reverberating,

infinitely heard

White Light of Spirit,

invited to fill

Elemental influence

 

Water, Fire

 

Earth, Air


Guardians of The Watchtowers

called to attend

 

 

 

Lady of The Hunt

Mistress of the Moon
luminous pathway

portentious runes

 

 

Beloved Horned One

Keeper of The Vine
I call to you Bacchus

Your power is mine.

 

Seed me with your essence

 

fertile,

 

verdant,

 

fecund

 

all things connected

 

The Circle

 

One

 

Ethereal Ribbons

Umbilical Links

Empower My Wishes

 

 

Infuse Creation

Focused Intent

Sculpted Ethers

Realized Dreams

     

        

As I Will It So Mote It Be

By the Lady of The Moon

And The Lord Of The Vine

 

 

I Cast My Desires

 

 

And Then They are Mine

 

 

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  • Donnie Darkhorse
    July 5, 2007

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    amazing

    this is very good, i love your style.....i have a book out also, feel free to check out my stuff, keep in touch : )


  • vici377
    June 24, 2007

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    wow

    your poem is very good... it leaves the reader with the sense that the majicks are working.. great job..totally infuses an airy feeling in my being.. thanks for sharing..


  • Creatress
    March 23, 2007

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    Two Thumbs UP

    A well timed read for me. Calling back to the divine and retracing the circle to acclimate into today. I appricate the depth and enchantment this poem radiates. The power and poise. Very strong write that reads like a spell. I must check out more of your work!
    Nice to meet you,
    Creatress


  • Amythest Moonjade
    February 19, 2007

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    Merry meet,

    this is an intresting invocation to the Goddess of the Hunt (I am assuming Diana or perhaps Athene) and to Bacchus(or again I am assuming Dionysus). I feel as if you have left off the closing of the invokation. I can feel the power being raised in the words, but there is no place for it to go or to be released. Regardless of my feelings, this is (as I am sure you know incredibly sophisicated work.

    Amythest


    • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
      February 20, 2007
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      I realized upon your review and another earlier today that this was not quite a completion of the thought so I have edited and am much more satisfied with the piece altogether. I hope you have a moment to revisit!
      xxoo
      dk


  • th3sl4y3r
    February 17, 2007

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    I really like start of this poem, the first stanza is worded so magically.. I like how you used single lines between stanza's. it gies the poem real depth and flow.. the ending just seemed a bit unfinished, like there was more to it, but it was the end.. however it is still a wonderful poem, with great ideas incorporated in it.. well done!!


  • crystallynnbradford
    February 16, 2007
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    nice

    I really enjoyed reading your piece. It is very well written and very inspirational.


  • Blissful Melody
    February 11, 2007

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    Nice

    Very nicely done! A beautiful write indeed. Capturing, entrancing, and true. Well done and good luck in the contest!
    Nikido


  • JohnnyD gold member
    February 8, 2007
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    Diana,

    VERY interesting! I know what you have been reading, I
    myself think that;

    The Power is in The Visualization
    The Magic is in The Thought

    What knowledge now has God wrought

    "magic" is oft simply miracles of thought misunderstood.

    JD 8rose*


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    February 8, 2007

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    Grok

    May the future extend a luminous pathway
    unto the Lady of The Hunt Mistress of the Moon


    May you always drink deep. May our eggs share a nest. May you never be thirsty...

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