Between
backs breaking&visions failing,
tensions caving&eyes watering
I think
I've had my fill
of everything
My shoulders ache
from trying to keep my head
up
straight
&your condescending
bullshit
isn't helping
any
of this, sweetie
My stomach's churning,
scolding me again
for letting my guard down...
any second now&it'll be
up
out
...bombs away, baby...
[We're getting older
but not any smarter]
Your mouth still tastes of gummy bears&tequila,
gramma's homemade remedy
of Benedryl&liquid hydrocodone
Over all the screams piercing&memories freezing
&complete lack of adjectives
for what I'm feeling
my heart's
growing
slightly
stale
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I'm just allovertheplace. Not my best.
tear me apart, dolls
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"my heart's growing slightly stale"
--thats a beautiful image
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"&your condescending
bullshit
isn't helping
any
of this, sweetie"
I don't think I could ever write out emotions like you do, sweets.
Noise&&Kisses
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Ha...random&incessant. Glad you like;; you're so amazing. ♥
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Nowhere near as amazing as you.
Noise&&Kisses
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Well maybe you are all over the place but it's a feeling that gets written out well, I feel.
"backs breaking&visions failing,
tensions caving&eyes watering"
and
"Over all the screams piercing&memories freezing
&complete lack of adjectives
for what I'm feeling"
--are my favourite parts. I love the lack of adjectives line ... sometimes there are no words for a feeling. No one knows how you feel because it cannot be spoken, written ...
The ending feels like me. Fuck!
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