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Breathless




Half way

    around the world

yet, here

     with me still

Your touch,

       your voice,

             your kiss,

                 your energy

leaves me ~

                       breathless



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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    How energies travel and linger, especially when we long so for them to. This really touches a cord in my soul. Gorgeous and deep. LOVE THIS.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    February 8, 2007

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    I know these feelings so very well! Reminds me of that special one who touches my heart with his love...
    Oh, my friend; this is just awesomely beautiful! Wish you all the best in the contest!

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 8, 2007
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    To be loved so completely, it is wonderful.

  • bookworm987
    February 8, 2007
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    different

    i liked this one a lot...great job and good ouck in the contest!
    [Elizabeth&hearts]