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Numb

I cry out
To the wind
And it sweeps away my pain
As ice numbs me

From the outside in.

I cry out
To the wind
As it whispers to my tears
And it soothes
My empty soul

I
Do not
Need you.

You
Will not
Have me.

And I have cried out before
Only to get a harsh response
Of the wind
And the ice
And the snow
And the pain

As they make me
So, so
Numb.

And the only question left
Is why
Do I
Keep crying?

Author notes

Lately I've begun to like the feeling of numbness. The brisk winter air does naught to change that.

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  • A falling star
    February 8, 2007
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    I like this poem a lot. It's really good. You are very talented.
    I like how you have one word then two words then two words in some spots. Overall, this is just a magnificent poem.
    Keep up the good work.