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Only one

am i the only one
who cares about you this way
do you know how i feel
can you even take a guess
i never thought i'd say this
but
am i the only one
who cares about you this way
i dont know why
but
do you even try
keeping everything inside
making yourself up
on the outside
don't turn back
don't let it fall apart
did you try
did you try so hard
that it all fell apart
you gave me your trust
and i kept it to myself
for so long
but now...
you've gone to far
your killing yourself
just stop...
put the makeup down
throw away the trashy clothes
and come to me
im here
it's ok, i want my friend back
lets talk about it
just you and me

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  • MarimbaMiss
    February 8, 2007

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    wow this is really good......there is a lot of emotion in this ......its a great write///thank you for the read...
    ~~~ in love in death

  • in-the-twilight
    February 8, 2007

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    Wow it's amazing the amount of people who are out there that are fake and care so much what others think... I've got a friend like this...! A great write! Rock on! xoxo meg


  • poet-guy17
    February 8, 2007
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    I have a friend like this and that is why I enjoyed reading this poem. Good write. ~Ľũčąś~